Terry L shuff Posted August 18, 2017 Share Posted August 18, 2017 Sleep reveals the vision, at it's will, Nightly it dictates, my mind obeys. Futile are my efforts, to impede, Powerless, reluctant, I concede. What meaning for me, does this vision, hold? Concealed the purpose, images can't tell, Yet comes the night, once more, the visions spell. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted August 19, 2017 Share Posted August 19, 2017 I like this Terry and I can relate. I love snippet poems, a fleeting thought, clear, relatable, familiar. Nice. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terry L shuff Posted August 19, 2017 Author Share Posted August 19, 2017 Thank you Tink, maybe some day I learn what this dream is about, its not scary, just, some kind of subconscious, concern. Nothing to do with any thing of a concious matter. No big deal. thanks again Terry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted September 4, 2017 Share Posted September 4, 2017 This poem is certainly dreamlike. It's has the same feel as of one of my favorite poems, "Empire of Dreams" by Charles Simic. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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