JoelJosol Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 I should not have looked your way your head bowing as if to pray I did not see the tears leaking from your eyes because mine blurs my own- what a joy to see how they glisten in the flickering afternoon light. (Hi. This short piece just burst forth from my head when I visited the site again. I thought I will never write again :-) How are the folks here?) Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 This is beautiful Joel, it burst from you in a fluid melody. If you haven't been writing, you certainly have not lost your touch. I am so excited to see you here. I have missed you. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoelJosol Posted August 30, 2017 Author Share Posted August 30, 2017 Hi Tink/Judi, Glad to re-visit the site. Thanks also for your generous comments. The schedule is still hectic but I missed writing. So, I will do my best to break from so much work and participate again. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted September 1, 2017 Share Posted September 1, 2017 A well toned and elegant piece that exemplifies the show not tell ethic. Enjoyed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted September 4, 2017 Share Posted September 4, 2017 I agree with Geoff's remarks. Short lyrical verse is my favorite. Nice to see you. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoelJosol Posted September 7, 2017 Author Share Posted September 7, 2017 HI Benjamin and Tony, thanks for the read and kind words. I am putting some time in my busy schedule for writing. I hope that I can sustain it. Glad to be back. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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