Sun Bathing

[Larsen M. Callirhoe]

Sun Bathing

 

I wake up and go to the beach.

To me it is

the most relaxing place on Earth.

 

I love watching half naked women sun bathe.

I also love the breeze on my half naked body.

 

I would gp to the beach just to watch women

rub sun screen lotion all over their bodies.

I would fantasize that it was me caressing

their lovely grand bodies.

 

I feel the air on my body at the beach

and the sweat of my loins cool me off.

 

I listen to the waves coming and going

out to sea

Crashing on the shoreline.

 

I remember my youth

And all the pretty women

I used to flirt with.

 

I would tan and get real dark.

My philosophy has changed somewhat.

I now would rather be white as snow

and stay out of the sun.

 

I would also now prefer a women

who is not tan

And is white.

 

It is amazing how age

changes your perspective

On such issues.

Edited July 21, 2009 by Larsen M. Callirhoe

[Bloodyday]

Hi Larsen

 

 

a touch of eroticism crashes in mind while passing holiday in lovely peaceful beach.

 

 

In Asia and other part of the world, peace has gone due to terrorism outbreaks, and i have a doubt coming future may not gift us such a beautiful holiday in the beach!

 

Ahhhhhhh............forget the complexity.....let's enjoy the lovely naked bodies...............

 

[goldenlangur]

Hi vic,

 

 

I like how you link the rise and fall of the waves to your own emotions and perceptions of romance, fun and attraction of women on the beach. There's also a sense of passing time in the way your poem closes on a thoughtful note that your perspective has changed.

 

I also like the diary/journal-entry tone of your poem .

 

goldenlangur

[tonyv]

I like how the poem toggles between present-past-present-past and ends with a declaration which kind of grounds it in reality.

 

Should I post a picture of me, surrounded by beautiful women, at the beach? Nah ... you don't wanna see me in my speedo!

 

Tony

[Aleksandra]

Victor dear, I enjoyed reading this poem. It have some hidden passion and eroticism. The poem goes slow and peacefully - I love that way. The point of the poem is also good and real.

I love this poem Victor.

 

And Tony :D, I want to see you in speedo :D. If you post, maybe somebody else will post too heh. Definitely post a picture with you and some babes next to you ;).

Ah you dangler...

 

Vic thank you for wonderful reading.

 

Aleksandra

[Lake]

I particularly like the change in the last three stanzas, which carries a sense of maturity, of being settled down.

 

Best,

 

Lake

[pawn shop]

another gem....the one thing that stands out is your use of perspective.

I smiled at the " get real dark' line....

ahhhhhhh the ocean.....nice thought in winter-time

[Larsen M. Callirhoe]

thanks everyone for commenting on this one. johnathan i used to live in south florida and went to the beach an average of at least once a month foor at least four or five years. i went at night allot to south beach to see the festive mood and party goers. ah the beautiful women.

 

vic aka larsen