Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 20, 2009 Share Posted May 20, 2009 (edited) Sun Bathing I wake up and go to the beach. To me it is the most relaxing place on Earth. I love watching half naked women sun bathe. I also love the breeze on my half naked body. I would gp to the beach just to watch women rub sun screen lotion all over their bodies. I would fantasize that it was me caressing their lovely grand bodies. I feel the air on my body at the beach and the sweat of my loins cool me off. I listen to the waves coming and going out to sea Crashing on the shoreline. I remember my youth And all the pretty women I used to flirt with. I would tan and get real dark. My philosophy has changed somewhat. I now would rather be white as snow and stay out of the sun. I would also now prefer a women who is not tan And is white. It is amazing how age changes your perspective On such issues. Edited July 21, 2009 by Larsen M. Callirhoe Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodyday Posted May 20, 2009 Share Posted May 20, 2009 Hi Larsen a touch of eroticism crashes in mind while passing holiday in lovely peaceful beach. In Asia and other part of the world, peace has gone due to terrorism outbreaks, and i have a doubt coming future may not gift us such a beautiful holiday in the beach! Ahhhhhhh............forget the complexity.....let's enjoy the lovely naked bodies............... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 20, 2009 Share Posted May 20, 2009 Hi vic, I like how you link the rise and fall of the waves to your own emotions and perceptions of romance, fun and attraction of women on the beach. There's also a sense of passing time in the way your poem closes on a thoughtful note that your perspective has changed. I also like the diary/journal-entry tone of your poem . goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 20, 2009 Share Posted May 20, 2009 I like how the poem toggles between present-past-present-past and ends with a declaration which kind of grounds it in reality. Should I post a picture of me, surrounded by beautiful women, at the beach? Nah ... you don't wanna see me in my speedo! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 20, 2009 Share Posted May 20, 2009 Victor dear, I enjoyed reading this poem. It have some hidden passion and eroticism. The poem goes slow and peacefully - I love that way. The point of the poem is also good and real. I love this poem Victor. And Tony :D, I want to see you in speedo :D. If you post, maybe somebody else will post too heh. Definitely post a picture with you and some babes next to you ;). Ah you dangler... Vic thank you for wonderful reading. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted May 20, 2009 Share Posted May 20, 2009 I particularly like the change in the last three stanzas, which carries a sense of maturity, of being settled down. Best, Lake Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pawn shop Posted May 20, 2009 Share Posted May 20, 2009 another gem....the one thing that stands out is your use of perspective. I smiled at the " get real dark' line.... ahhhhhhh the ocean.....nice thought in winter-time Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 20, 2009 Author Share Posted May 20, 2009 thanks everyone for commenting on this one. johnathan i used to live in south florida and went to the beach an average of at least once a month foor at least four or five years. i went at night allot to south beach to see the festive mood and party goers. ah the beautiful women. vic aka larsen Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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