Tinker Posted February 1, 2018 Share Posted February 1, 2018 Someone, Please Fix MeMy dang washer's worn again! It "sucks" to get old,or in my case, "drips".I just drip, drop, drip like a cold with a runny nose.I guard earth's precious elixir, preparedto share at a touch. I love it when I'm free!Streams of healing, life saving, cleansing, refreshingwater flowing forth.This is what I live for! Help! ~~Judi Van Gorder Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted February 2, 2018 Share Posted February 2, 2018 Still smiling after enjoying this several times. When I first saw the title, I thought it was a call for help with some topic -- a double post or something -- but I was delighted to see it was poem. Line 2 and the last two lines lead me to believe there's an underlying metaphor at work. An excellent personification of the leaky faucet. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted February 2, 2018 Share Posted February 2, 2018 Quote My dang washer's worn again! It "sucks" to get old,or in my case, "drips".I just drip, drop, drip like a cold with a runny nose. Lovely magic Tink - the ordinary comes alive with a convincing voice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted February 4, 2018 Author Share Posted February 4, 2018 Thanks guys. I leave all of the serious stuff for you two to write, and I have all of the fun. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted February 5, 2018 Share Posted February 5, 2018 A light-hearted personification with which I'm starting to identify all too strongly. I like the way the piece, uhm, flows. - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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