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A New Morning


JoelJosol
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The first rays of sunlight broke through the window
just when you turned to me.  I  see
the beach, white sands, and blue-green waters from here.
The waters glisten, as your lips met mine.
I find comfort from your body’s warmth even while the breeze 
keeps pushing these curtains, white as foam of waves, 
off the window frame.
I don't need a cup of coffee now
if you won't let go of your warm and tight embrace. 
In this bluish morning, as the coolness lingers here,
let your eyes be the sun of my sky.

 

* This will be my anniversary poem for my wife in our 32nd. 

"Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach

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Thanks for the read Tinker, especially, that you are a woman reading this. If it appeals to you I am positive this will appeal to my wife..

"Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach

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The locale is exotic and appealing. This is very nice work, and she should love this, Joel.  (Not to mention, you love her more than coffee, and that says a lot, lol!)

Tony :happy:

PS -- I love "bluish morning."

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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