Tinker Posted February 20, 2018 Posted February 20, 2018 "If a tree falls in the forest and no one is there. . ."A g-r-o-a-n and a c-r-a-c-kshatter the sapient silence. A widow makercrashes to the forest floor.In its wake, a hush hovers. ~~Judi Van Gorder A "sonic" Tanka Playing with sound, in particular onomatopoeia. Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
tonyv Posted February 21, 2018 Posted February 21, 2018 This is very nicely done from content to form. I like the layout, the special typography in L1, and the onomatopoeia. Nothing is overdone; it's just right. Even the title is perfect. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
Tinker Posted February 23, 2018 Author Posted February 23, 2018 Thanks Tony, I appreciate your attention to the details. It is encouraging. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
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