Tinker Posted February 24, 2018 Posted February 24, 2018 Some silliness...The Boy Who Loved Laughter I saw him born and watched him grow, a bright and funny boy I know. He wanted to become a pro in fun and laughter on the go. A stand up comic he'd become upon his banjo he would strum. The boy preferred to dream at school, and on occasion mocked the fool. He made kids laugh and played it cool, then sat upon a yellow stool to bellow silly words that rhyme to pass away the study time. But finally he found the light, he'd prep and study well at night. In class he'd work with all his might to learn enough to do things right. Though laughter always turned a frown, so he would ever be the clown. ~~Judi Van GorderA La Charta using the prompt words preferred, fun, yellow and bright Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
tonyv Posted February 25, 2018 Posted February 25, 2018 Judi, I don't find this silly at all. Though I didn't think it would appeal to me, when I read the poem it became apparent that it wasn't a children's poem (or about children), rather it was about a particular type of person. I liked this very much. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
Tinker Posted February 25, 2018 Author Posted February 25, 2018 Thanks Tony, This is a form and prompt driven poem. And it seemed silly to me until I had those 2 elements out of the way. But then it turned on me and settled into a human nature study in a way. I'm glad you liked it. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
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