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No Beginning, No End


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No Beginning, No End

Water pours 
        from the heavens
                 without beginning or end.
Splashed down
        to the earth
and bounced back up
                 to greet
the continuance of the fall.
It streaks 
          and shimmers in the air.
Puddles form
          and small rivers splay
                  across unfettered space.
Water soaks my feet 
                  and hair,
strikes my face
           and blurs my vision.
Now is the rain.
               ~~ Judi Van Gorder

Genre: Boketto

~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

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I like this Tinker: It's written in a manner one could almost "loop" the end to the beginning, and it would still read well, no matter where you started reading. YarnSpinner

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  • 1 month later...

Judi, the content fits the form well. I aggree with YarnSpinner that this reads (i.e. "flows") well. I would add that the poem has a touch of the concrete. It looks like rain.

Tony

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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