Tinker Posted April 10, 2018 Posted April 10, 2018 Shifting SandsShifting can be subtle, at first unnoticed.Shifting from the freeze to the thaw, warming sun.Shifting from grey to golden, prisms of light.Shifting from barren limbs to cherry blossoms, poetry.Shifting from dying to new life, a miracle. Seasons shift, from one to another. Winter, Spring, Summer, Fall, come full circleshifting over and over and over, through centuries. I'm in my winter years, would that I could,shift to Spring and on . . . . . . ~~Judi Van Gorder Notes: Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to [email protected]
David W. Parsley Posted April 27, 2018 Posted April 27, 2018 Tink, when you figure out that particular trick, would you mind noting here how to do it? In the meantime thanks for the treatment in anaphorics! - Dave Quote
Tinker Posted April 28, 2018 Author Posted April 28, 2018 ? Nice seeing you posting David. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to [email protected]
tonyv Posted May 11, 2018 Posted May 11, 2018 I always love repetition. It's one of my favorite devices. Terrific thread: shifting sands, shifting season, life. I really love I'm in my winter years and would that I could. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
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