dr_con Posted October 5, 2018 Posted October 5, 2018 Sanctuary Sanctuary is Home without address Longitude and Latitude It spirals with you Through the ever Yes ever moving remembrance this this is where You Belong this this Everchanging is always always Your Home. Quote thegateless.org
Tinker Posted October 6, 2018 Posted October 6, 2018 Hi DC, Interesting use of repetition. I have to admit I wanted to see where this was going. I needed more. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
tonyv Posted October 9, 2018 Posted October 9, 2018 A lovely exaltation of ephemerality. While @Tinker's point is well taken -- the same can be and has been said about plenty of my works -- for me it's most often about the mood. And what can capture the intangible sense of the transitory better than poetry or perhaps music? Thank you for taking me there. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
JoelJosol Posted October 13, 2018 Posted October 13, 2018 The use of enjambment has worked effectively for me with the theme of "everchanging" present, dr_con. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach
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