Tinker Posted October 27, 2018 Posted October 27, 2018 Crazies Lunatics target right target left black or white one sends bombs one powder makes no sense scream louder crazy talk stay aware odd actions best you share live your life it's a must unafraid we will trust. ev'rything can't be fixed don't incite lunatics ~~Judi Van Gorder Footnotes: Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
tonyv Posted November 11, 2018 Posted November 11, 2018 Nice work, Judi. One small suggestion -- I would eliminate the period at the end of S4. The title definitely caught my attention. If you're into zombies, the infected, whatever they may turn out to be in the "apocalypse," I recommend the movie The Crazies (2010 film). Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
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