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Come Sail With Me


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Come Sail With Me
The flame ignited,                                hot-air-balloon.jpg
hot breath
heats her at her core
 causing a warm blush
to bloom from inside
and rise, expanding,
 pregnant with anticipation.

She smooths
her kaleidoscopic,
upside down-teardrop gown
and ascends higher
and higher into the blue,
dragging her painted
gondola behind.

An invitation                                                                                                                       
to sail with the clouds.
              ~~Judi Van Gorder

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~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

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Yes, I think I'll come along for the ride. "Pregnant with anticipation" works well. I wonder if "dragging her painted / caboose behind" would be too much of a stretch.

Tony  🎈🌤️

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