Tinker Posted January 29, 2019 Share Posted January 29, 2019 Come Sail With Me The flame ignited, hot breath heats her at her core causing a warm blush to bloom from inside and rise, expanding, pregnant with anticipation. She smooths her kaleidoscopic, upside down-teardrop gown and ascends higher and higher into the blue, dragging her painted gondola behind. An invitation to sail with the clouds. ~~Judi Van GorderNotes: ▼ Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted January 30, 2019 Share Posted January 30, 2019 Yes, I think I'll come along for the ride. "Pregnant with anticipation" works well. I wonder if "dragging her painted / caboose behind" would be too much of a stretch. Tony ⛅🎈🌤️ Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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