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Men and fish waiting

in small hills

of the sea

 

sweet hands will

come as the low clouds

dancing in the water and wind.

 

by JTParreira

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Fascinating JT.

 

A clear image- with a certain ironic twist---

 

Sweet-Hands on D-day?

 

Powerful stuff, greatly enjoyed...

 

DC

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a beautiful poem with lovely images and textures. thank you!

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Aleksandra

Wonderful expressions in this poem Joao. Imageries are perfect also.

 

Thanks for sharing.

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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is it a haiku?

 

 

but imagery portrait is so strong! always recalling an ideal day to miss!

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