Tinker Posted March 3, 2019 Share Posted March 3, 2019 And it Keeps On Coming Heavy with tears the nebulous glow hovers above my sanctuary soon to dump tremulous buckets upon already sodden earth Cloudburst. Nearby river rises in the flow attempts to escape to the sea blocked by incoming ocean tide flooding the land waiting rebirth Cloudburst. ~~Judi Van Gorder Verse Form Brady's Touch Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted March 3, 2019 Share Posted March 3, 2019 A pleasing read. I picture you there, in Napa Valley vineyards, about to be overwhelmed by rising waters from an impending rain storm! But it's not too late to compose this poem. I love the use and repetition of "Cloudburst." Tony 😀 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted March 4, 2019 Share Posted March 4, 2019 Hi Tink. I would prefer the title to be Cloudburst, but the form demands otherwise. Either way I enjoy watery poems and that certainly translates here! best badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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