dr_con Posted April 17, 2019 Posted April 17, 2019 The Building of Future Ruins#deepadaption 4/17/2019 The little brown and white ceramic dog looks forlornly Into emptiness notice black feet and crutch ends their jagged ankled edges remains of a once proud Saint Lazarus (no the other one) the one who dances with Oya and takes the goods of those touched by plague the kind of god who starts disease In anger ends with healing and love Gave his statue (rather its absence) a beer today needing to celebrate rebirth and Spring as much as we need to celebrate the Winter Solstice And the promise of the Returning Light despite all the offerings and ablutions protective beats and cacophonic prayers he shattered due to events better left unsaid reminding us All and Everything only a future ruin Hekua Baba Hekua! from destruction always return Hekua Baba hekua! hekua baba hekua hekua Baba hekua. Quote thegateless.org
Tinker Posted April 18, 2019 Posted April 18, 2019 Juris, This one had me googling all over the place and I still don't understand. Did you know that when you google Hekua baba, your poem pops up as the first thing you see? I like the way this is structured and the ending chant. There is so much I don't know about. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
dr_con Posted April 19, 2019 Author Posted April 19, 2019 That's hilarious! I think we need to add a category of 'Google Poetry' -- Not just because people have to google things, but often I google to get correct spellings etc. I looked up Hekua, since it comes from a brazilian praise song for Omolu also known as Babalu Aye (Think Ricky Ricardo;-) I know the song ut the first spelling I found was Hekua, so yup, add me to the list of the many things I don't know;-) Juris Quote thegateless.org
David W. Parsley Posted April 21, 2019 Posted April 21, 2019 Hi doc, A worthy production in a body of such outpourings that you have managed to accomplish during this month of daily poetry. Impressive, to say the least! I don't know how you and Tinker are doing it, really. Nice work. Regarding the closing refrain, the closest I could come was to a synthetic religious sect that developed in southern regions of the Americas, where the phrase, "Hekua, baba, hekua!" translates roughly as, "Blessings, father, blessings!" There are connections to an osira (roughly, a deity) who both imposes and rescinds heinous diseases like smallpox, but I could not follow this well without at least a partial immersion in the topic which I declined to undertake. This capstones the early stanzas dealing with this theme, playing the universal chant of the perplexed body of victim and bereaved trying to comprehend forces that lead us without discernible reason or cause to slaughter and/or personal loss, hoping to attract a benevolence or obscure kind of judgement which will in turn grant a reprieving stay. The piece taps into a timeless human element intersecting with a broader spiritual impulse that guides and misguides our journey in aggregate as well as individually. BTW, I note the word abulition - did you intend ablution? Or is this a specialist's jargon, perhaps even a doc-invented term? (One never knows!) Thanks, - Dave Quote
dr_con Posted April 24, 2019 Author Posted April 24, 2019 D avid thanks for the catch, indeed ablution;-) And yes, that's my Baba 'Omolu' 25 years now;-) And the point of inspiration was an old broken Saint Lazarus Satue that used to sit in our SF Integral Voodoo Terrero, Now just the feet. TY for taking the time to analyze;-) Juris Quote thegateless.org
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