dr_con Posted April 19, 2019 Share Posted April 19, 2019 There was a Time #deepadation 4/19/2019 There was a time homeless waiting for a bus under a sagging concrete bridge near midnight LA hip restaurants casting a hungry shadow across night’s amplified loneliness we knew home never would be again There was a time we shot forth into an oxygen rich atmosphere wailing as we fell certain in this world of external eaters comfort would never be again There was a time a few minutes ago I was certain words had left me as I comfortably cleaned our kitchen remembered we never stopped falling and home always will be again. Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted April 21, 2019 Share Posted April 21, 2019 This one works very well for me, doc. Through the process of an oblique narrative, the narrator becomes one of the homeless. Thanks, - David Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted April 24, 2019 Author Share Posted April 24, 2019 TY! appreciate the Comments;-) Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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