eclipse Posted May 28, 2019 Share Posted May 28, 2019 Water through time shaping rock, disparate parts of a clock waiting to tell the time-does language shape dreams?. Celtic scenes replayed in the moon's tear raised from song. The moon is like a wheel on fire when pagan ghosts enter the dreams of non believers as they dig the sky for clouds to water forgotten graves creating an incantation to make this church cry itself a the tear of a pagan God. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 28, 2019 Share Posted May 28, 2019 The most striking, memorable image has to be when pagan ghosts enter the dreams/of non believers. I love it! The title drew me in. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted June 3, 2019 Share Posted June 3, 2019 I thought digging "the sky for clouds to water forgotten graves" was a fascinating image but Tony's right "when pagan ghosts enter the dreams/ of non believers" is the winner. Nice~ ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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