Tinker Posted July 13, 2019 Share Posted July 13, 2019 Gulf Coast Saturday Morning Hurricane Barry ferries destruction. Disruption of life, rife with wind and rain. Strain on Saturday, stay or flee the storm. Warm, muggy zephyr, suffers light damage. Images of flood, mud and mess hits news. ~~Judi Van Gorder Verse Form: Raay Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted July 16, 2019 Share Posted July 16, 2019 Quote mud and mess hits news. So often the case with news items, perhaps another reason for an 'uplifting' royal kiss 😀 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted July 16, 2019 Author Share Posted July 16, 2019 Haha Yep Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted July 18, 2019 Share Posted July 18, 2019 Having lived through Ike and Harvey, the photos and the form help to crystallize the poem, if I am using that in the proper sense. A tension is added (heightened?) that I think might NOT be there except for the strictness. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted July 18, 2019 Author Share Posted July 18, 2019 Thanks Marti, The limited syllable count per line was a challenge. ~~Tink InvitationGive this form a try,Thai verse in July.Why not join the quest,test your writing skill?Will you meet with me,be brave, write a Raay. ~~ Judi Van Gorder Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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