eclipse Posted July 22, 2019 Share Posted July 22, 2019 I dreamt of being a she wolf sleeping with one eye open in a forest-in the distance i could see my human self in a watchtower carved out of my frozen tears.Laid in hospital attached to a drip cancer undresses feminist consciousness the moon howls and the sun hollas as I catheterize it to fill me with fire. The only thing now scene from the watchtower is a forest of burning trees. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted July 23, 2019 Share Posted July 23, 2019 Hi Barry, This is quite moving, I had no problem embracing this piece. The images clear, "watchtower carved out of my frozen tears" WOW! ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted July 28, 2019 Share Posted July 28, 2019 Enticing ... until the part about the human self sets in. Good work, Barry. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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