For My Granddaughter, Trinity

[Tinker]

For Trinity

Fresh gusts of scented air traverse
the satin curve of sun-blushed cheeks.
A love caress in nature’s verse,
a silent, timeless vow it speaks.
Your beauty blossoms from within;
unselfish acts are sure to win
esteem from those who watch from afar
your trek to catch the promised star.
                               ~~Judi Van Gorder

Verse Form:  Rispetto

[tonyv]

I love dedicated works, Judi. This is a lovely one with impeccable meter. I would change one small thing; I would use a semicolon or a full stop at the end of L5 after "within."

Tony

[Tinker]

I think you are right Tony.  Will fix it.  Glad you like it.

~~Judi