dr_con Posted August 8, 2019 Share Posted August 8, 2019 When I read other Poets Sometimes - I feel - I am Being pelted by stones My Heart is suspended somewhere in everywhere emptycaverns soon to be gone gone gone othertimes more a nod and wink behind the scenes traitors to surface - we pretend to have secrets in depth - a set and setting of Objects with their suspect susceptibility to hallucination and other distortions a divine construct of paint and faux faux meant to be seen at a comfortable distance or be subject to ever-ever-ever moving swarm ‘All those vibes’ resonate resound repeat renew ‘from which we create physiks cosmos and You’ or so we tell each other part of the greeting a handshake which says ‘no matter how complicated or complicit our weaving we just don’t know’ There! right here! It gets into your bones this hollow The Motions an echo of the Un the Not the Silence before and after - ‘ See? I told you.’ Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted August 10, 2019 Share Posted August 10, 2019 Hi Juris, This is a compelling piece and it has pulled me back to read over and over. The repetition of words was very effective in cementing the movement of the poem in my mind. i really enjoyed reading this. ~~Judi Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted August 14, 2019 Share Posted August 14, 2019 Agree with Tink. A compelling write. Excellent work J. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted August 27, 2019 Share Posted August 27, 2019 I wonder if "pelted by stones" is a good thing. On the one hand, you're feeling it, on the other hand, it's unpleasant. But which is better, the pelting or the nod and the wink?!? I'm just going through the motions ... Tony 😃 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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