jakecaller Posted December 21, 2019 Share Posted December 21, 2019 my chan making love to you as snow falls take away the blues for to day nothing but the blues birds call nothing more the blues snowing the wild birds call continues snowing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted December 22, 2019 Share Posted December 22, 2019 Very, very nice , Jake. I like how you use "blues" where the reader would expect "blue." It' hard-hitting, very winter, light a fire how bout a dedication? Nice, Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakecaller Posted December 23, 2019 Author Share Posted December 23, 2019 thanks for the feedback glad you like it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted December 28, 2019 Share Posted December 28, 2019 Yes, really enjoyed TY for sharing J Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poetjohncompton Posted January 9, 2020 Share Posted January 9, 2020 I enjoyed how you used blue also. a soothing subtle poem. Quote https://www.facebook.com/poetjohncompton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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