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Music God somewhere uttered "Saginaw I believe

is the place where America will receive a genius of  
music". Distant drumming of stars, constant swimming
of the disparate bars of unwritten songs that would become
the soundtrack to love and war. Stevie Wonder strove for
vision through melodies eyes music was his guide through
deserts of ice and sand, an hourglass of angels sang his songs.
Black pride was unified strand by strand, angel's tongue in the
groove of a 45 single, Motown band would demand black and white
unify.
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Barry,  I think this piece has all of the elements and it is a nice tribute to a legend.  I do think it would be an easier read with different line breaks.  You seem to run everything together which creates a little confusion.  At least for me.  

~~Judi

~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com

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