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Gutted

What is this internal wrenching
tearing apart
throbbing 
ache?
he's gone away
left me
ache?
he won't be back
empty
ache?
      ~~jvg

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~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

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Visceral and vicious and maybe viscous? That hacking up of what the internal wrenching brings forth? ;_) Really a nice write and an interesti9ng form. Thanks Judy! 

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