Colonize

[eclipse]

quantum ghosts paint the train destined

For a single point.Dying stars miss their

Appointment with infinity.requiem in

Gravitys cathedral.The imperceptible call

Of the darkness of space for comprehensions caress.Cauterize the

Arm of a deity to colonize his vision

To drown his chisel as he explores the

Drafts of new worlds.

[Tinker]

10 hours ago, eclipse said:

                                Dying stars miss their

Appointment with infinity.

Nice!

I'm not sure I get the last part, I'll have to let this marinate.  I'll be back.

~~Judi

[tonyv]

The title is extremely provocative; I love it. Taken together with the poem it evokes origins, from that of the author to beyond, to elsewhere, then onwards to an otherworldy realm. 

Tony

[JoelJosol]

The diction and choice of words - quantum, dying stars, and space - brings to me thoughts about astronomy, structure of things, the burning gas of stars, the lack of apparent stability of things. I found the term 'cauterize' and was able to link it with the burning stars. 
Then, the poem switched from that complex entanglement of space to the challenge of writing a poem, as complex as astrospace.