Tinker Posted April 9, 2020 Share Posted April 9, 2020 April's Super MoonA golden globe pinks the April night sky.A glowing reminderof a cyclical universein perpetual motion.With tides in and outand nature's rosy renewal in spite of this grey spring arrival.We shelter insideavoiding the toxic rain of viral infection and long for the rainbowof face-to-face smilesand warm touchof another's hand.We wait prinked with hope. ~~Judi Van Gorder Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted April 10, 2020 Share Posted April 10, 2020 Everything seems to fit, especially "With tides in and out." Yes, it makes total sense when it comes to an anytime moon, but it was unexpected in a poem about this super moon. Nicely done! Tony 1 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted April 11, 2020 Share Posted April 11, 2020 hi Judi prinked - that was a new word for me! Quote and long for the rainbow of face to face smiles and warm touch of another's hand. Yes, shows that the real, as opposed to the virtual, is still central to life. Nature gives us humility and hope. best Phil 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A. Baez Posted April 11, 2020 Share Posted April 11, 2020 This was my favorite line: Quote We wait prinked with hope. I love how this echoes "pinks" in the first line, and the idea of ending a poem with expectation: it's like paintings in which some of the subjects are looking with potent expressions toward somewhere outside the frame. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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