dr_con Posted April 12, 2020 Share Posted April 12, 2020 an Alchemist on Easter 4/12/2020Con/Jur/d Nothing says rebirth like Moss- covered rocks he says Why the hurry to roll them away to distinguish between a resurrection of the flesh and the Cherry Tree’s rebirth whose roots have split the Stone in order to feed Spring’s short lived blossoms. Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A. Baez Posted April 12, 2020 Share Posted April 12, 2020 An interesting concept, and a subtle, delicate, haiku-like feel--I like it! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted April 12, 2020 Share Posted April 12, 2020 I did a little reading on alchemy and was led to this: Alchemy in Art and Entertainment. My level of erudition on the subject is still too low to comment meaningfully, but it seems you're in good company. I do get the gist of the poem. Nicely done! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A. Baez Posted April 13, 2020 Share Posted April 13, 2020 Tony, cool link! While the details of alchemy are complex, the basic metaphor is very simple--it's about near-magical transformation. I did some research on it myself when I was writing a sonnet with an extended metaphor of lover as alchemist, trying to transform her beloved into human "gold." (As in the alchemists' experiments toward this end, the poet's effort was futile!) I suspect that the basic metaphor is all you need to know here, though only Juris could say for sure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted April 13, 2020 Share Posted April 13, 2020 Hey Juris, I have to say, this short piece made total sense to me and I loved it. Resurrection is of course at the core of yesterday's "holy day". Your poem celebrates every day of spring as "holy days". What is more holy than God's creation? This was focused, concrete and optimistic. ~~Judi 1 Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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