Jump to content
Poetry Magnum Opus

an Alchemist on Easter

Rate this topic


Recommended Posts

an Alchemist on Easter 4/12/2020
Con/Jur/d

Nothing says rebirth like Moss-
covered rocks he says

Why the hurry
to roll them away

to distinguish between
a resurrection

of the flesh and
the Cherry Tree’s rebirth

whose roots have split the 
Stone in order to feed

Spring’s short 
lived blossoms.
 

thegateless.org Come on over and check out my poetry substack y'all;-) Or if your bored, head to the Zazzle store: https://www.zazzle.com/store/gateless. If you buy anything I lose a bet, so consider that before you violate the digital rules.

 

Gate(less.png

Link to post
Share on other sites

An interesting concept, and a subtle, delicate, haiku-like feel--I like it!

  • Like 1
Link to post
Share on other sites

Tony, cool link! While the details of alchemy are complex, the basic metaphor is very simple--it's about near-magical transformation. I did some research on it myself when I was writing a sonnet with an extended metaphor of lover as alchemist, trying to transform her beloved into human "gold." (As in the alchemists' experiments toward this end, the poet's effort was futile!) I suspect that the basic metaphor is all you need to know here, though only Juris could say for sure.

Link to post
Share on other sites

Hey Juris,  I have to say, this short piece made total sense to me and I loved it.   Resurrection is of course at the core of yesterday's "holy day".  Your poem celebrates every day of spring as "holy days".   What is more holy than God's creation?   This was focused, concrete and optimistic.   

~~Judi

  • Like 1

~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com

Link to post
Share on other sites

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.
Note: Your post will require moderator approval before it will be visible.

Guest
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.

×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

By using this site, you agree to our Guidelines.