tonyv Posted April 16, 2020 Posted April 16, 2020 Mid-April 2020 #tonyv It's seven, and the sun's still up. I'm drinking red; I drink it all year long. Let's skip this spring and slide right into summer just like this ... Stand closer, and I'll steal a kiss! Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
Tinker Posted April 18, 2020 Posted April 18, 2020 Now this is cute. Very unexpected of you, I like this side. A Johnny Walker fan, it fits. What is best, the rhythm, each line flows into the next and the end rhyme was a surprise. Loved it. ~~Judi Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
tonyv Posted April 18, 2020 Author Posted April 18, 2020 5 hours ago, Tinker said: What is best, the rhythm, each line flows into the next and the end rhyme was a surprise I like it, too, Judi. Thank you! Tony 1 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
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