tonyv Posted April 16, 2020 Share Posted April 16, 2020 Mid-April 2020 #tonyv It's seven, and the sun's still up. I'm drinking red; I drink it all year long. Let's skip this spring and slide right into summer just like this ... Stand closer, and I'll steal a kiss! Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted April 18, 2020 Share Posted April 18, 2020 Now this is cute. Very unexpected of you, I like this side. A Johnny Walker fan, it fits. What is best, the rhythm, each line flows into the next and the end rhyme was a surprise. Loved it. ~~Judi Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted April 18, 2020 Author Share Posted April 18, 2020 5 hours ago, Tinker said: What is best, the rhythm, each line flows into the next and the end rhyme was a surprise I like it, too, Judi. Thank you! Tony 1 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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