Tinker Posted April 24, 2020 Share Posted April 24, 2020 The Pacific The water flavors the wind that sticks to my skin with its salty presence. Never still, never silent, the tide trespasses then recedes back to its depth after soaking the sandy shore leaving behind its cast offs. My evening looks out to the edge of the world where the ocean falls off the ledge and slowly takes the sun with it. ~~Judi Van Gorder April 20 a body of water Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted April 26, 2020 Share Posted April 26, 2020 Lots of feeling and tangible imagery in this one. My favorites have to be Quote the tide trespasses and Quote My evening looks out to the edge of the world ... The second one is of unbelievable quality. I love it! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted April 26, 2020 Author Share Posted April 26, 2020 Thank Tony, I have lived where I could see the Pacific Ocean from my home, all but 1 year of my life. The home I grew up in looked out onto the San Francisco Bay and I could look out beyond the Golden Gate from their living room window to the Pacific. I did live 9 months, in 2 apartments (6 months downstairs, 3 months upstairs) a little inland and with no view of the ocean from the time I left home to work and when I married and moved upstairs with my husband. (I met him in the parking lot of the apartment building the day after I moved in.) Then we bought the home I live in now with a view of the Pacific's horizon through a dip in the trees from my front windows. I am watching the sunset from my desk right now. It is subdued tonight. I don't know if I could be happy living too far away from the mountains and the ocean. They are part of me. ~~Judi Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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