bob Posted October 9, 2020 Share Posted October 9, 2020 It’s Time To Go After many years have passed- Filled with happiness and woe; The good lord will call to me, When it’s time to go. He will offer his hand- I will try hard to stay, His grip will gradualy tighten, As I slip away. Loved ones say I’m sleeping now, There’s a smile upon my face. All worries that I had, Will have then...been erased. From my earthly life I had- To cherish and to love; My spirit will journey To a better place above. Dear LORD...I’m coming- I looked forward to this day, To be welcomed to your kingdom Where forever I will stay. Bob Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted October 9, 2020 Share Posted October 9, 2020 An epitaph to the self? Well-expressed! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bob Posted October 13, 2020 Author Share Posted October 13, 2020 Thanks Tony... I can only hope that I meet all of his requirements. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted November 9, 2020 Share Posted November 9, 2020 A voice of faith that has strengthened with time, that faces the next stage of existence with assurance. Though the words 'savior' and 'gospel' do not appear here, their fingerprints are all over this tranquil piece. Thanks for sharing this here, bob. David Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoelJosol Posted November 12, 2020 Share Posted November 12, 2020 'I will try hard to stay' is a fundamental truth about humans and dying captured strongly in this piece. No one sets a date for his death. For as long as we are strong and healthy, we will press forward, 'try hard to stay'. 'Loved ones day I'm sleeping now' has a biblical sound to it. In the Bible, it uses the metaphor of sleeping for dying. Jesus referred to Lazarus who was already dead as sleeping and he was to go there to wake him up. No wonder Jesus promised to wake up all the dead (a metaphor for resurrection). Happy to see those fundamental things in a piece like this. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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