JoelJosol Posted November 24, 2020 Posted November 24, 2020 A red rose held in my hand caught my tears on its petals like dew shimmering from the sunlight's kiss, leaked by rain clouds above the garden where I stood. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach
tonyv Posted November 29, 2020 Posted November 29, 2020 Joel, I like how the poem is nicely composed as a single succinct sentence. Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
JoelJosol Posted December 7, 2020 Author Posted December 7, 2020 Hi Tony, I emulated Williams poetry in this one with the wheelbarrow short poem. Thanks for noticing its short one sentence. That means somehow I successfully emulated him. 1 Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach
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