dr_con Posted December 15, 2020 Posted December 15, 2020 Flying 101Con/Jur/d 12/15/2020 The Teacher pushes me off a high, high edge I feel gratitude when I do not hit or land. Quote thegateless.org
badger11 Posted December 16, 2020 Posted December 16, 2020 Enjoyed Juris, though again I feel the possibilities comes be simplified: Quote The Teacher pushes me off a high, high edge I feel gratitude when I do not land. best Phil Quote
JoelJosol Posted December 31, 2020 Posted December 31, 2020 Reminds me of eagles and their eaglets. They let them go from a cliff, and then picks them up again in mid flight. I can understand the enjambment in the second line to sustain the cadence of the first line. 1 Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach
tonyv Posted January 25, 2021 Posted January 25, 2021 Nicely succinct, Juris! And I love Joel's eaglet reference! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
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