dr_con Posted December 15, 2020 Share Posted December 15, 2020 Flying 101Con/Jur/d 12/15/2020 The Teacher pushes me off a high, high edge I feel gratitude when I do not hit or land. Quote https://conjurd.substack.com/welcome Come on over and check out my poetry substack y'all;-) Link to post Share on other sites
badger11 Posted December 16, 2020 Share Posted December 16, 2020 Enjoyed Juris, though again I feel the possibilities comes be simplified: Quote The Teacher pushes me off a high, high edge I feel gratitude when I do not land. best Phil Quote Link to post Share on other sites
JoelJosol Posted December 31, 2020 Share Posted December 31, 2020 Reminds me of eagles and their eaglets. They let them go from a cliff, and then picks them up again in mid flight. I can understand the enjambment in the second line to sustain the cadence of the first line. 1 Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to post Share on other sites
tonyv Posted January 25 Share Posted January 25 Nicely succinct, Juris! And I love Joel's eaglet reference! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to post Share on other sites
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