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Experimenting with open space on a page.

 

Just Another Day


Freshly made bed                                                  .



with pristine snow-white sheets                              



                   SOILED
                             
with yellow
brown-green
                                        chunky vomit

shiny and oderous



Again.                                                                      .
         ~~jvg                                        

~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com

Posted

Works and quite powerful. Organized on the page here or? Nice Judi.

 

Ty J

Posted

Thanks Juris,  Yes it was tricky to set up.  I wanted to creats a visual that fit the content.  I actually did it before copying and pasting but when I copied and pasted, it went into left margin so I had to center it and then move lines around anyway.  Actually this site is probably one of the easier sites to move lines and words to where you want them.

~~Judi 

~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com

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