tonyv Posted April 10, 2021 Share Posted April 10, 2021 Carmen, pour the carmenere when everywhere is anywhere it's easier to look away -- each day with her is gone by dawn -- still, on and on, the beat goes on ... Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted April 12, 2021 Share Posted April 12, 2021 Tony, absolutely delightful, and I love that you spent 4 days perfecting it. I'm, as always very impressed. Light, delightful with an existential edge rarely read outside of the 70s and 80s poets;-) Juris Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted April 12, 2021 Author Share Posted April 12, 2021 1 hour ago, dr_con said: ... I love that you spent 4 days perfecting it ... Juris, thank you! I only spent a couple of hours on this poem, but I’m counting it as days 1-14 of poetry month. 😂 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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