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Carmen(ere) (4/1-4/10 2021)


tonyv
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Carmen, pour the carmenere
when everywhere is anywhere
it's easier to look away --
each day with her is gone by dawn --
still, on and on, the beat goes on ...

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Tony, absolutely delightful, and I love that you spent 4 days perfecting it. I'm, as always very impressed. Light, delightful with an existential edge rarely read outside of the 70s and 80s poets;-)

 

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1 hour ago, dr_con said:

... I love that you spent 4 days perfecting it ...

Juris, thank you! I only spent a couple of hours on this poem, but I’m counting it as days 1-14 of poetry month. 😂

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