dr_con Posted April 17, 2021 Share Posted April 17, 2021 After Image and Other 2 Word Visions Con/Jur/d 4/17/2021 Old growth, shagged bark, occupied hollow, feral hedge, explodes yellow, entwines green, accents white. Shadows boil, leaves flail. Shriek & squeak, branch shudders, quiet thumping. Smell rain, taste iron, feel clouds, breath shortens. Something moves! Hurry home, after scene. Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 2, 2021 Share Posted May 2, 2021 Nice one, Juris. I think where it hits me hard is here: On 4/17/2021 at 5:14 PM, dr_con said: ... Smell rain, taste iron, feel clouds, breath shortens. Something moves! Hurry home, after scene. Hurry home -- and I love how the title comes full circle from "After Image" to "after scene." Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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