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Day 7 Yep that's where I left off . . . . Appetite


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Way behind got some catching up to do.   I know impossible, but anything I can write even this bad is a gift to me.  Killing two birds, a new form which I found the rhythm awkward.  


One dish
fried fish

Made portion small
Won't eat all
Hit a wall

Complains of noxious smell
He's never eaten well
No more dinner bell
I'll try some gel

A new era has arrived
His appetite took a dive
Ensure is keeping him alive

for now he is revived
and thankfully he will survive


A Ziggurat 


~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

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I can see why it feels awkward. But Found it fun. Nice work Judi, and no worries. I've found this NaPo to be valuable while extremely, at times frustrating, but I'm doing it and I hope the value ultimately outweighs the frustration;-)


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