dr_con Posted April 29, 2021 Share Posted April 29, 2021 Some poets are best read Con/Jur/d, 4/29/2021 Some poets are best read, in smoke-filled bars and back rooms, now banned and highly discouraged -- on a rocky outcrop, overlooking sunrises and sunsets their sinking and rising crafted by shadowed mountains and dark valleys with secret bones -- others at the beach, sailboats and fishboats bobbing, bobbing, bobbing --- in electric blue arc-light, the only memorable features cement, and the taste of iron -- on the toilet, with a Buddha on a high shelf saying “Even here, even here.” -- the best, are those read on a dirt floor, near but not touching the brightly painted central pillar, with the smell of cigars, rum, and Florida Water creating a subtext, clearly underlying everything -- in the vast reaches of outerspace, “Can’t breathe, can’t breathe, can’t breathe,” on this little blue ball spiraling through infinity -- before gates guarded, chained to the fence screaming “Not in my name, not in my name” -- coming down, every neuron tired from a night of overstimulation, curled in blankets scented with fall-leaves and wood smoke, saying “Wake me after the revolution” -- or simply and plainly read by you to me. Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted April 30, 2021 Share Posted April 30, 2021 Juris, There is something very familiar to me in reading this. It felt at home in this piece. ~~Judi 1 Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted April 30, 2021 Author Share Posted April 30, 2021 Interestingly that is exactly the section of my insides this came from. The I know this poem, rather than the I wrote it will write this poem. Even when editing, it was correcting the lines towards familiarity, rather than changing lines... My autocorrect is definitely gonna have a day with me. Lines were written as limes 😂 1 Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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