dr_con Posted June 10, 2021 Share Posted June 10, 2021 All into one space after Anne Waldman Con/Jur/d, 6/10/2021 After all, it’s impossible to argue with poets, prophets When I met Anne Waldman I could still write, the horizon stretched around the World, perspective could travel 360 degrees, 40,075 kilometers and 21 centimeters, back to where we are looking, easy Before everything, everyone was frozen behind glass Even her poem, How to Write, is the same, identical, everywhere we’re compressed flat, in the airport, in my paper-strewn office, walking down the stairs, just in time, I freeze wait for my Soul to return, feet on separate steps I don’t tumble How many times a day do we compress lose our molecular mass? Pressed beyond a first, second, or third draft, overwritten, illegible, They’re doing their best to make us all surface, with no depth, Pictures don’t die. They just decay Sometimes the power goes out they blink, cease to exist without pain, boredom, suffering I’ve been assured as soon as the the solar fields, and the Sun Drill Platform, are finished, trademarked, copywrote, branded we’ll be back as bright as before, brighter where the shadows are deeper, the Sun fails to shine On the other side of this mirror, I’m crying I know you are too No matter how simple, true these human emotions, the festival of words are complicated, shiny, colorful, embedded, and squished together in this petri-dish, where we can be easily manipulated Drugs remind us we’re in charge, although, we need the Artists to seize control, again, help prop up the roof, hollow out a space for the living, apply paint thick and thin, to every object-emitting gravity, no matter how weak, and to write words, fleshing out the rocks and the trees and the sand the roads, and paths, outside here, and music, yes music rolling through the air roiling our bodies, manifesting in space this space Where we write When she first read What her voice and hand said in 1968, is the same space, now as it was then Careful! Don’t stumble Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted June 13, 2021 Share Posted June 13, 2021 "They’re doing their best to make us all surface, with no depth," and "we need the artists to seize control again". Yes, to everything. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted June 13, 2021 Share Posted June 13, 2021 This reads like a tribute, and I like it -- appreciate the link. Most intriguing would be What her voice and hand said in 1968, and that it is the same space, now as it was then ... Same as it ever was, Tony 1 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted June 19, 2021 Share Posted June 19, 2021 Hi Doc, I was sure at the beginning that this piece was going to be your version of Coleridge's, "Dejection: An Ode" - an appeal to lost creativity and insight, feelings that once powerfully moved the author but now are mere whisperings. But no. This is the poetic realization of an entire culture's crisis of emotional freedom, the yearning to emerge from the shadow of oppressive anxiety into fullness of experience and expression, the need to resume those most resilient of coping mechanisms in art, music and song. Very Nice! - David 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoelJosol Posted June 21, 2021 Share Posted June 21, 2021 If this piece were an emulation of Anne Waldman (I checked the link), I must say it is successful. In tone, in diction, in flow, and structure. The central image that stayed with me is the stairs where the N waited for his soul to return, and not stumble. It stood in contrast at the admonition at the end. 1 Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted June 25, 2021 Author Share Posted June 25, 2021 Thank you all. And indeed it was all of these things. Much appreciation! Juris Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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