bill kamen Posted June 22, 2021 Posted June 22, 2021 Standing in silence,where land meets the sea,I have come to talk to you again,with unspoken words of love.I go back on a memoryto that summer placesomewhere , somewhere only we knewWhen the sunset came down upon the shoreand in the fading light we danced in the darkto the song of a summer placeLike a lighthouse, your guiding lightalways there forever beckoning.You made it so easyThe way you didThe things you didPure love, pure loveYou gave me pure loveWith the sea at your feetyou strayed into my armsand there you stayedwith the raging seathe untamed wavescrushing your heartOh girl, with youEvery day was something newthe woman in you fulfilled everything I neededYou touched so easilyYou felt so easilyOh, Mercy Mercy me What was going on?Why was it so hard for me to say and doall the things I really felt?You made it so easyThe way you did The things you did Pure love, pure love You gave me pure loveI watched your heart breakright from the startI took everything you gaveand gave nothing in returnand now you are goneTry to understandsome things never changebelieve me, I tried but I held it all inside and threw away all that we could have been.You made it so easyThe way you didThe things you didPure love, pure loveYou gave me pure love Quote
tonyv Posted June 27, 2021 Posted June 27, 2021 Bill, it reads well and could be set to music. A heart wrenching journey from "pure love" to lost love. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
Gunslinger Posted June 29, 2021 Posted June 29, 2021 An unusual form, but the content is superb. Very descriptive and tugs at the emotions. Well done. Quote
dr_con Posted July 1, 2021 Posted July 1, 2021 Indeed it can and should be set to music. Strong beautiful images. Well done. Quote thegateless.org
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