eclipse Posted August 1, 2021 Share Posted August 1, 2021 The 160 arches of the Segovia aqueduct, like the Mouths of angels all making Different requests to the wishing well sky, perhaps to Become mortal and appreciate local beauty. The moon moves between Rivers, eresma, clamores, A shamen traveling between Dreams, to transfigure the dreams of visitors so they Become briefly the eyes Of angels, winds are the Moving tattoos. The vera Cruz church is a tattooists needle, prayers The ink, will angels paint this Church on the chest of our lord. Their are views from The tower, does the candle Name it's flames. The house of Antonio Machado will guise your Senses towards a new aesthetic, the day will break out Into a shower of glass arrows, perhaps one of them Will land on the castle of alcazar to release the echo of A poets voice. This castle is On the north western tip of The city, it has narrow towers And artesonado ceilings, Scaffolding for the spirit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted August 5, 2021 Share Posted August 5, 2021 Barry, I enjoyed this poem's sense of place. Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted August 15, 2021 Share Posted August 15, 2021 Agreed. Wonderful sense of place, Barry. Your repetition of the word, angel(s), does not come across as vain repetition in this instance. Instead it works as refrain, and move with an intentionality that invites contemplation of these beings' diverse roles. And of course to our own response to such a place. Well Done, - David Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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