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If I could shrink heaven,
Balance it on
An infinite thread
With a pearl, 
Make the tree catch the
Fruit, expand
Your heart until it
Absorbs the earth.
I first found you
Whispering
At the confluence of two
Rivers of clouds,
Your beauty and 
Spirit perfectly balanced,
Two wind horses 
Danced. Your hair blowing
Like the
Uplift of swans.
 

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David W. Parsley

A romantic love poem that Neruda could applaud, Barry.  Very clean and fresh as a meadow breeze.

Nice!
- David

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  • 1 month later...

Hi, eclipse, 

Lovely poem--Lyrical, beautiful. Like where the line breaks come.

"Your hair blowing Like the Uplift of swans." How much do you want for it? (joking).

Best, AHL

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