Magic Hour

[tonyv]

You're out of your mind, out 
of my mind: everywhere
we turn, nowhere to go.
From rat-a-tat to rat-
a-tat-remember-that,
my new one is a smoke show. 

[badger11]

I'm getting a sense of disconnection Tony, or at least distraction or distancing, but also a reality reminder of being locked in. Memories always knocking.

Phil

[tonyv]

Thanks, Phil, for your kind remarks.

On 11/22/2021 at 4:09 AM, badger11 said:

I'm getting a sense of disconnection Tony, or at least distraction or distancing, but also a reality reminder of being locked in. Memories always knocking.

Yes, I do see all of that built in to this one. I had second thoughts about posting it, and I was going to remove it, but your timely reply negated that option. The best I could to do is re-assign it to the members-only overflow showcase!

Tony 😀

[badger11]

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I had second thoughts about posting it, and I was going to remove it,

Why?

[tonyv]

Just now, badger11 said:

Why?

I didn’t think it was worthy … 😳

[badger11]

William Stafford wrote nearly 22,000 poems. I like to think poetry writing is the place to be!

[tonyv]

1 hour ago, badger11 said:

William Stafford wrote nearly 22,000 poems. I like to think poetry writing is the place to be!

Thanks for the encouragement, Phil. 😊 Anyway, I edited the last line, changed it back to what it was before you originally replied.  My intent, before editing, appears now in the original/top post.

(Last line in the version you replied to was: “the new one is my smoke show.”)