tonyv Posted November 22, 2021 Share Posted November 22, 2021 You're out of your mind, out of my mind: everywhere we turn, nowhere to go. From rat-a-tat to rat- a-tat-remember-that, my new one is a smoke show. Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted November 22, 2021 Share Posted November 22, 2021 I'm getting a sense of disconnection Tony, or at least distraction or distancing, but also a reality reminder of being locked in. Memories always knocking. Phil 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted November 24, 2021 Author Share Posted November 24, 2021 Thanks, Phil, for your kind remarks. On 11/22/2021 at 4:09 AM, badger11 said: I'm getting a sense of disconnection Tony, or at least distraction or distancing, but also a reality reminder of being locked in. Memories always knocking. Yes, I do see all of that built in to this one. I had second thoughts about posting it, and I was going to remove it, but your timely reply negated that option. The best I could to do is re-assign it to the members-only overflow showcase! Tony 😀 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted November 25, 2021 Share Posted November 25, 2021 Quote I had second thoughts about posting it, and I was going to remove it, Why? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted November 25, 2021 Author Share Posted November 25, 2021 Just now, badger11 said: Why? I didn’t think it was worthy … 😳 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted November 25, 2021 Share Posted November 25, 2021 William Stafford wrote nearly 22,000 poems. I like to think poetry writing is the place to be! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted November 25, 2021 Author Share Posted November 25, 2021 1 hour ago, badger11 said: William Stafford wrote nearly 22,000 poems. I like to think poetry writing is the place to be! Thanks for the encouragement, Phil. 😊 Anyway, I edited the last line, changed it back to what it was before you originally replied. My intent, before editing, appears now in the original/top post. (Last line in the version you replied to was: “the new one is my smoke show.”) Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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