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A couple more haiku


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I love haiku! I just can't write it. Haiku is (are?) like dew drops on roses in the gentle morning sun.

 

These are so lovely, so simple, so elegant.

 

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The second one is right on. I always knew you could.

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a sea mist floats in

to mute the colors of spring

the roses whisper

 

beautifully delicate, 'whisper' is one of my favourite words

 

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Tinker wrote:

 

a sea mist floats in

to mute the colors of spring

the roses whisper

I hear it ...

 

Tinker wrote:

 

dial swings to eighty

and road ahead zips behind ---

siren sounds

Not exactly the "siren song" I had in mind ...

 

Tony

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