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You v2.0


tonyv
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When pinot noir is not the answer,
meter is not the answer. What 
you on about you know what makes
me happy. City lights shine on.

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badger11

I'd be guessing 🤔 What makes me happy is a Chelsea bun and a . I've given up on most, too complicated, simple is best😉

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JoelJosol

Tony, your poem might be brief and simple. But it is a clever way, via process of elimination, of leading to the answer - "city lights shine on."  But the context of that is being with the 'You" which is the mystery for the reader.

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"Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach

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tonyv

Phil and Joel, thank you for the thoughtful remarks. I made a couple of somewhat relevant replies, then lost them to this morning's site database maintenance. "Thanks" reactions sent.

Tony

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