dr_con Posted April 6 Share Posted April 6 bead We know we will give it up red, black, red, a white one in-between repeat 7 times and mix it up, rules are 3, 21, 4 depending on who you wanna call, who you wanna ally with who you are, when you pay attention you can see the curves a curvaceous past unchangeable the future unknowable, unknown know no O O O O Our present a pressure rounded diamond our experience held by temporal excretions a smoothed pearl we live in the oo of our loop was & will be bell-shaped fore & aft a bead hung here with you. 2 Quote thegateless.org Come on over and check out my poetry substack y'all;-) Or if your bored, head to the Zazzle store: https://www.zazzle.com/store/gateless. If you buy anything I lose a bet, so consider that before you violate the digital rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 This is very visual. The shapes form. True the past is unchangeable. The present a diamond and I see the future still developing as the pearl in the shell, though that isn't what you said. The reader brings their own treasures to the poem ~~Judi 2 Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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