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Frank E Gibbard
Posted

Numerologists get off on numbers

Naturally, you needn’t go figure.

Poets put quality before quantity

Being wedded to apt word order.

They see this world figuratively,

In a calculated fashion to sum up

How they enumerate Xs and whys

That confront you and me in the big

Human equation of our relativity.

 

(edited courtesy of very good advice)

Posted

Bull headed- as a Taurus- perfect! says what needs to be said, clear, concise and well, well done!

 

DC

Posted

I must admit that using apt beats the right/best used by past greats in a similar context.

 

It is not bull headed but right on the spot but only nigh perfect , because shouldn't X's and whys (Frank, you clever man) confront me not I?"

 

I think not using "me" you miss a sweet and merely incidental inner rhyme w/ "relativity".

 

A part time mathematician I was tickled but good. Thanks, Frank, for the quirky fun.

Frank E Gibbard
Posted
I think not using "me" you miss a sweet and merely incidental inner rhyme w/ "relativity".

Couldn't but agree w/you wax. Cheers & thanks for the kind words. Frank

Posted

Hah! Funny I just had to read this poem with an British accent. That never occured to me before when reading your poems Frank... I thoroughly enjoyed this read.

 

~~Tinker

~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com

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