JoelJosol Posted April 30 Share Posted April 30 There is bliss to catch a glimpse from those eyes bringing back memories of the first day I saw you. We would not let go of our false timing in the turning of our heads, bringing joy in my heart. Why do I keep holding on with these hands, when you are not going away, with those eyes and smile? We are like aging red wine that has grown sweeter still, whose cup is full of your glances and my memories. (I finally pulled out a poem in time for our anniversary last Feb. Finally got some break to visit PMO.) 2 Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted May 1 Share Posted May 1 Why do I keep holding on with these hands, when you are not going away, Wow. I don't care WHAT the world says about sentimentality.....I likes it! And I liked that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted August 28 Share Posted August 28 Joel, this poem is heartfelt and well composed, lyrical and lovely. I especially like the effect delivered by the question in S3. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoelJosol Posted September 3 Author Share Posted September 3 On 5/1/2022 at 10:36 PM, dcmarti1 said: Why do I keep holding on with these hands, when you are not going away, Wow. I don't care WHAT the world says about sentimentality.....I likes it! And I liked that. Thanks. I am glad that I was still able to pull it off in time for our anniversary. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoelJosol Posted September 3 Author Share Posted September 3 On 8/28/2022 at 6:49 PM, tonyv said: Joel, this poem is heartfelt and well composed, lyrical and lovely. I especially like the effect delivered by the question in S3. Tony Thanks too, Tony, for the read and appreciation. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omar013 Posted September 3 Share Posted September 3 Very lovely and romantic. I particularly loved the last stanza, great work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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