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Demon


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Demon
            --for Ghislaine

Now, run away and tell
me how you feel inside.

November and December
shivers still abide
within me, in you; hold

me when I'm terrified.

The
daddy issues--let
them ride. We'll be alright.

___________________________________
Is that you with a Rothschild???

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14 hours ago, badger11 said:

So tight, so impactful Tony. Excellent. You work the icy i and it burns.

Phil

Phil, I love what you've said here. The convoluted (i.e. twisted) part: this is a love poem.

Tony

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  • 3 weeks later...

I really like this piece. Short, punchy, memorable. The line breaks are excellent, and every word is chosen and used to great effect.

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