tonyv Posted July 3, 2022 Posted July 3, 2022 Demon --for Ghislaine Now, run away and tell me how you feel inside. November and December shivers still abide within me, in you; holdme when I'm terrified. The daddy issues--let them ride. We'll be alright.___________________________________ Is that you with a Rothschild??? Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
badger11 Posted July 10, 2022 Posted July 10, 2022 So tight, so impactful Tony. Excellent. You work the icy i and it burns. Phil 1 Quote
tonyv Posted July 10, 2022 Author Posted July 10, 2022 14 hours ago, badger11 said: So tight, so impactful Tony. Excellent. You work the icy i and it burns. Phil Phil, I love what you've said here. The convoluted (i.e. twisted) part: this is a love poem. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
mikejewett Posted July 29, 2022 Posted July 29, 2022 I really like this piece. Short, punchy, memorable. The line breaks are excellent, and every word is chosen and used to great effect. 1 Quote
tonyv Posted August 28, 2022 Author Posted August 28, 2022 Mike, we'll give this one a "B+" for effort. But really, thank you for your kind (and generous) reply. It means a lot. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
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