tonyv Posted July 3, 2022 Share Posted July 3, 2022 Demon --for Ghislaine Now, run away and tell me how you feel inside. November and December shivers still abide within me, in you; holdme when I'm terrified. The daddy issues--let them ride. We'll be alright.___________________________________ Is that you with a Rothschild??? Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted July 10, 2022 Share Posted July 10, 2022 So tight, so impactful Tony. Excellent. You work the icy i and it burns. Phil 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted July 10, 2022 Author Share Posted July 10, 2022 14 hours ago, badger11 said: So tight, so impactful Tony. Excellent. You work the icy i and it burns. Phil Phil, I love what you've said here. The convoluted (i.e. twisted) part: this is a love poem. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikejewett Posted July 29, 2022 Share Posted July 29, 2022 I really like this piece. Short, punchy, memorable. The line breaks are excellent, and every word is chosen and used to great effect. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted August 28, 2022 Author Share Posted August 28, 2022 Mike, we'll give this one a "B+" for effort. But really, thank you for your kind (and generous) reply. It means a lot. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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