rhymeguy Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 I have journeyed to foreign lands. Studied the work of foreign hands. Tried new skills with some success; Not the worst; Not the best. Spread my wings and flown around. It’s time to return to familiar ground. To tend the soil that I love best; to leave behind all the rest; to nurture and care for tender shoots; find my way back to my roots. With pockets full of lessons learned the prodigal poet has returned. I may be seen as simple lacking in sophistication; too old and badly damaged; beyond restoration But I have made the journey from lollipops to OZ; gathered wisdom, heart and courage; seen the glory and the flaws I had to take the journey to learn, where’re I roam, when all is seen and gathered it’s time to go back home . RHYMEGUY Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 What a journey, Rhymeguy! It struck the cord. I can certainly relate to it. Re unsophistication, I think sometimes, the simple-minded have a better perception of the world. Regards, Lake Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick Tselepides Posted May 26, 2009 Share Posted May 26, 2009 Nice little poem and very musical. If I were you I would delete all the : marks, replacing some with a comma. The poem would look better on the page and the effect would be the same. Thanks for sharing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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