Tinker Posted September 8, 2022 Share Posted September 8, 2022 Song from StillnessPoems thrive within a still mind,the sting of slurs bespoke unkind,compassion's soft touch, threads that bind,the treacherous trek, the slippery slide,all in silence, no place to hide.The trick to share these muted finds,cacophony of concrete grindsin harmony, become the guide.A poem thrives.It's no matter when eyes are blind.Inside, the clarity designedwill surface and flow with the tideouting shape and color, wide-eyed.The poet's soul, unleashed, defined.A poem thrives. ~~Judi Van Gorder Verse Form: Rondeau Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted September 11, 2022 Share Posted September 11, 2022 I really like that concluding stanza, Tink, the resonance of poetic inspiration in tune with motions of the natural world. It also invokes the power of Lewisian Joy with its Psalmist proclamation of the cup running over. Thanks, - Dave 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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